Let's start over. Here's AJ's original post ...
Ajw118 wrote: Hey everyone,
So with all your help, I've managed to get basically everything right from the run up to the plant and leg swing up. Unfortunately, I mess up in the air everytime. Sometimes, I turn to the side. Other times, I do the huffman roll or I don't ride the pole all the way. Usually, I try and kick over the bar. I'm not really sure what to do past the leg swing up. Can someone help me out?
Thanks,
A.J.
And Here's his follow up reply ...
Ajw118 wrote: My coach has told me everything else is good, so i assume it is too.
And here's the stats on YouTube, where he's posted several vids ...
Height: 5 7. Weight: 150, Pole: 130, 13 ft 6 in. Grip: 1: 10-11 feet
On YouTube, he also says he's 23 years old. I'm a little confused about that, because he looks like a HS vaulter. But let's leave that small point aside for the moment, and look at this situation as being a bonafide request for help from a bonafide FELLOW POLE VAULTER. We're all here to help each other, aren't we? AREN'T WE???
So let's put our egos aside, and just try to POLITELY assist our fellow vaulter ... OK?
The first thing I noticed from AJ's initial post was that he was FRIENDLY and POLITE. So that should set the tone for our replies. Let's be FRIENDLY and POLITE in helping him. And if anyone decides not to help him this way, then it should be a very easy matter to simply
REFRAIN from replying. Is that so hard?
So with all your help, I've managed to get basically everything right from the run up to the plant and leg swing up.
What does this mean? Well ... to me it means that (a) he's appreciative of "all our help"; and (b) he THINKS he's BASICALLY doing "everything right".
Then, he says he "messes up in the air" ... and he's "not really sure what to do past the leg swing up".
These are very simple statements explaining in rookie language that he needs guidance. He's NOT on an ego trip saying he's PERFECT in his execution of the run/plant/takeoff/swing phases of his vault. He does SUGGEST that he's getting "everything right", but don't criticize him for not having the vocabulary of a PVP veteran. He's just learning the sport, and just learning the lingo, so give the guy a break, eh!
Don't criticize his THINKING or his VAULTING just because he doesn't yet have a good grasp of the PV VOCABULARY ... or even a very realistic self-assessment of his PV abilities. For gosh sakes, he's only gripping 10-11 feet, and hasn't quite caught on yet to the basic swinging technique. THAT'S WHY HE'S ASKING FOR HELP! DON'T CRITICIZE HIM FOR THAT!

I'm also surprised that he says he sometimes does the Huffman Roll. I don't know where he got that impression from. Someone must have misled him by telling him that.
AJ: You're NOT doing the Huffman Roll! Huffman was a world-class vaulter, and his technique was extremely advanced. Search YouTube for Scott Huffman, and you'll see what this technique looks like. He clears the bar (set at more than 19 feet!) one leg at a time!
There ... you see that I gave AJ some matter-of-fact information, without being snotty about it? It wasn't really that hard. I just kept my own ego in check.

Kirk