Thanks Mike!
SR, please understand that it is quite difficult for us to give you very specific tips without knowing you all that well. In fact, many "quick tips" in the pole vault don't really help out much at all since we would be trying to give you very simplified advice for what is technically a very complicated event. It's a case of "there's more to it than just that" - as a result it will take more time and a thorough build up to develop your technique properly.
However, as far as useful advice goes I think it's best to give you a good idea of what you're trying to achieve. Always remember, one of your primary goals is to always move the pole up and forward. You're not trying to bend it, you're trying to move it up and forward. As far as what's in the air, one big beginner mistake is to worry too much about the bar, this leads you to doing lots of funny things in the air - unlike what you would normally practice. So my advice, don't worry too much about the bar. Just do what you practiced. But in the end, I think you'll improve your airwork a lot over time, it's got a lot to do with experiencing the sensation and getting confident with it.
Also, one more thing that's VERY VERY important - don't forget to have fun!
-Andrew